“automated handshakes described below to be possible”
Too many new lines before “2) ISPs”. This could have been for some reason, though.
On section IV, the paper changes from reading all the way down the column to zig-zagging.
“Is a solid first step in the path to an actualized IoE”
Rephrase the abstract so that it doesn’t introduce ‘Fog Computing’, because he introduced that.
2011 he started Fog Computing. Enterprise IoT, you have sensors and actuators normally are organized in systems.
There are some instances where Fog Computing is a must have. One thing he proposes is using Fog Computing for wearables.
Wants to use the same Cloud infrastructure for Fog as much as possible.